Khonjin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[iPhone]

dude, awesome

Damn. I wanted to be the first 13 year old to hit the front page. But it was hilarious, so there ya have it

~I voted 5~

theblackkangaroo responds:

well thank you!! i was never expecting to be on the front page!

[DBZ in a Nutshell]

Rofl!

I will destroy you with my powerful.............................
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[Nintegaball GT: Ep. 1]

I'm sorry, I just can't stand it

The fact that it's exactly like Alvin Earthworms movies. And before you get angry at me, I do know you got Alvin EarthWorms permission to make this, but come on. It's almost the same in every way.

Nintegaballs: Chaos Emeralds

NintegaBall tracker: Emerald tracker. both made by Egad.

Wario and Walugi still on an Island just like the original?

almost exact same characters
Look, lots of effort was put into animating, and with a different story you could do great. Nice try though.

NessMasta responds:

It'll have a totally different story and plot, just wait when more episodes come out soon.

[Chaos Emerald Z preview]

Ever heard of Mario Broz. Z?

Yeah...you better look into that before you make something like this.

[Luis Day Song]

Omg Roflmao!

omg! It's Tom Fulp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awsome flash. Did you sing that song?!?

[Mini Battle]

wow!

This was pretty good for a second flash!

[Sonic Bloopers 2]

Meh, I think Hyruler13 pretty much summed it up.

But don't give up. It's just that the Humor wasn't that funny. Everything else was average I guess. When you make a joke do what I do.

1. Spend lot's of time on it

2. When your done, think, "Would I laugh at this?"

3. Have a tester to watch your movie first. (Well, I don't really do this but I might, and I think you should)

[The Best Flash Ever]

I loved this flash

I thought it was outstaing, amazing, awsome, really awsome, incredible, better than sex, better than chocolate, better than chocolate and sex at the same time, all the girls clothes were blown off isntantly....

[Stuper Mario Bloopers]

I've crapped out funnier stuff than that.

I happen to be making my own Mario Bloopers movie and if I learned something about good mario bloopers movies, it's that

1. Think of your own jokes(and make sure you can even laugh at them) even if there not funny, its better than seeing an over used joke over and over.

2. Don't over do it. It's stupid to go on and on with a joke, because even if it IS good, you lose your audience.

3. The flag pole thing, only do that once. If i had a dime for every time I saw a flag pole blooper, I wouldn't have to get a job. (well, I guess I still don't)

4. Blood and guts. All you did was the same thing over and over. Mario gets cracked and half, blood spills everywhere. I'm sorry, but watching that over and over doesn't appeal to me.

5. Graphics. One thing that irritates me is that you used drawing in your spriting. Drawing and spriting don't mix. And the title screen...omg...never draw a title screen. (unless you super good at drawing)

6. Music. Some are good, some arn't. Yours wasn't. It had low quality. And I didn't like it that much. But that's just me, some other people may like it.

7. Look at really great Mario Bloopers movies, watch them, and then think, "What can I do to be better than this movie?" that's what I am currently doing.

8. Go to the Newgrounds forums for flash help. I'm not saying this to be mean, I am a really great flash artist because of everyone on there.

9. Try again

10. Don't give up! I almost did, and if I did, i would never have started my flash projects.

And there's your 10 simple steps in making a better movie. The reason I kinda think this sucks, but I don't want you to give up is because I once made a really crappy movie like this, but since I tried again, I'm really good now. I think you can do the same. PM me if you want to learn some crazy tricks with flash.

[Zelda: Heart for the Hero]

Don't worry

This should be in the Zelda collection in a few minuts. :D great job!